Thursday, August 20, 2009

Him And Her Comments

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Him and Her...

This is a story of him and her...
One so smart.. and one not that clever...
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Julia Pascual
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Nashy Lamen 21 August 2009

And the story is? ? haha... you just told me what their personalities are towards each other... but all in all... I really like the poem.. the rhyme, . and the words used were powerful... Expressed well.. 'for this is a story of me and you'.. way to end the poem... =) Keep writting..

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Lorena Cruz 20 August 2009

Yes, this is a story of a one-sided infatuation... Definitely a story of one-sided admiration... And to tell, this story is nothing but true... For this story is about me and you... nicely written dude... keep it up..

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