Friday, May 30, 2008

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Listening to the childs song
the tuning fork struck on a prong
the gaurd on the computer is playing pong
but for freedom I long
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jordan erickson
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Saane Pahulu 21 October 2009

the ending is so powerful.. itd do similar to my situation but its for my little sister that i will live, cry, survive and die for wit hall my heart and without a doubt. this is a great poem 10+

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