Sunday, May 19, 2013

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I loved you with all ur flaws
I loved you and thats against our law
Everything you did is played in ma head like a show
I wish I can beg you not to go
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Batool Abdulhafid
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Utsav Patel 23 May 2013

You spilled hormonal gush in this poem... Simply good... I like it...

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Unwritten Soul 20 May 2013

Nice wordings, nice rhyming and it done in very well shape Batool_Soul

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Greta poem Batool, can feel the power in your words.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 May 2013

your happiness is my pleasure, very good. I invite you tom read my poems and comment.

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