Saturday, May 19, 2012

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I stand here on the corridor now looking at the boy i admire,
We all have that one boy in which we desire,
He's my world, my life, my everything, i want him so
And in my heart i know that his path will be the way i go.
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Joe Shaw
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Fadwa Gmiden 26 May 2012

This is really wonderful and well written t may all be in my head but i know for sure, That seeing him everyday any bad feelings i have he can cure, I admire it :)

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Rebecca Pepper 19 May 2012

your poem is really cute XD you just need to remember that one day your reality will be you held in the arms of the one that deserves your heart :) and then you can be all cute together and stuff =D

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