Saturday, June 5, 2010
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his eyes doesnt shine like a star
a duck walks better then he does
the way he sings is something you dont want to hear
you would never want to run your hand through his greasy hair
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Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~
13 June 2010
Love can make us think and do strange things. Had a chuckle whilst reading. Good one!
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7/26/2025 5:31:37 PM # 1.0.0
an enjoyable read Robin. Might spell check it, but not sure I'd change a single word. I like its blunt honesty and subtle humor. Well done. Keep Writing... -Rick