Hill Top Comments

Interesting poem thank for sharing this poem

Nice free wheeling story. Touching and emotional. The flow is grand and logical.. Seems 2 be a true story

On green grass near hill top sat one poet Seized with serious thought but very quiet He was lean and thin but on simple diet He mastered an art in composing the duet

interesting poem and well bonded

The poem emphasizes the important of perseverance and independence. A poor poet ostracized and disowned by his father and ignored by the public in general should persist and pursue that which he loves with utmost determination. It may well be that his profundity and cosmic concerns will never be acknowledged, but he must remain faithful to his calling. Another thoughtful poem. Thank you.

interesting topic gd one 10+

'He wondered at God’s beautiful creation Was it not serving right place for recreation? Who has time for observation and thinking? Hated and killing with moral slowly sinking' Wonderful. I like it very much these lines. Nice poem. Well penned Thanks for sharing with me

Sitting on the hilltop I am able to see many things around.

Should I leave it to fate and continue? Offer something concrete with ideas new .........10

Who has time for observation and thinking? Hated and killing with moral slowly sinking......10

He wondered at God’s beautiful creation Was it not serving right place for recreation? Who has time for observation and thinking? .........10

He had masterly skill but not looking smart Thoughts were slowly entering part by part It was not age of cars but small wheeled cart...10

Will my simple creation serve the purpose? If not serving well then what should I suppose? .......10

On green grass near hill top sat one poet Seized with serious thought but very quiet.......10

Poor parent forcing to forgo and ready to disown He determined to continue to achieve literary crown......10

Who has time for observation and thinking? Hated and killing with moral slowly sinking....10

This provided him peaceful and congenial atmosphere Long vision, right decision with new sphere................10

This provided him peaceful and congenial atmosphere Long vision, right decision with new sphere......10

This was shot in arm for newcomer and student He had many ups and down in the freedom movement Consolidated gain with slow and steady pace

Who has time for observation and thinking? Hated and killing with moral slowly sinking......10