Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Highrise Comments

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Standing on a highrise
just cant go on
running from this life I despise
just so cold and long
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Matthew Harrison 11 August 2009

beautiful. love it. but you betrayed your rhyme scheme in the 4th stanza.'highrise' and 'past'

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Serenity Prayer 11 December 2008

very sad ending, but an awesome poem. youre getting better and better with every poem you write. great job girl.

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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