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xDate & Time: 4/22/2015 8: 17: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 42059205 - Highly Impressed Member: Birgitta Abimbola Heikka Comment: Nice poem. Just two suggestions. Line 2, did you mean separated by none instead of one. Last line, I think it would read better if you said and treated you not casual. 7 hours ago

Heart Craze Thank you so much Hasmukh Mehta...that's so touching..I'm impressed to by your poem.. Very great day to you 1 min · Unlike · 1 13 hours ago

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...... Hasmukh Mehta welcome Megha Shukla, Manish Doshi Just now · Unlike · 1

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We are meant to be one Forever and separated by one

Nice poem. Just two suggestions. Line 2, did you mean separated by none instead of one. Last line, I think it would read better if you said and treated you not casual.