Wednesday, June 10, 2020

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Rating: 5.0

Mysteriously, from shadows
Our lights reached out and touched
Burning questions are massaged
By firm fingers of fire
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Simone Harriman
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Bri Edwards 19 November 2020

line 4 " firm fingers of fire " a fine alliteration line 6 who is this mysterious " she" ? last lines i like, even if i don't understand. " Across scarred charred hearts She rekindles our flame" The topics listed do help me; 'unfortunately' i don't 'do' spirituality. and..." she" ? bri :)

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 10 June 2020

destination unknown......life's mystery..finely set

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 June 2020

A well crafted poem. Simply splendid.....10+++

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