Faeries lie
And tell mortals
They care not
For it, yet
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The title caught my eye, the opening lines drew me in and from there I was hooked, caught up in an enchanting medley of delicate imagery that sparkles effortlessly from the page. A magical write Tailor...justine.
Pure enchantment. The title is especially effective. Kindest regards, Sandra
So sweet in it's effortless simplicity (perhaps it wasn't effortless?) You do write in such a way that it flows so very naturally! A lovely poem Tailor and one worthy of my 10! HG: -) xx
From the title to the end it's a spellbiding affair - as it must have been for you. 'Higher than the wind' on its own hints of the inacessible and ineffable. 'Merged into stargold The colour of shooting stars over prairie fire' is literally sensational. Another sprinkling of magic from that wand-like pen of yours Mr Bell (yes, a little echo in that name!) . jim
My, this takes me back to my ever-fascinated contemplation of fairy rings...which I am convinced are the intersection between real and magic! You certainly have touched the 'other' realm here. Val
Lovely poem Tailor.....Supernatural indeed! ! ! 10 from me Hugs Nickie x x
Love, love, love it! That's all I have to say about that. Hugs Anna xxx
Shooting stars over prairie fire is only one great line of this wonderful poem. I loved it and will keep it as a favorite. Nice to see your still at it Tailor. Have a great day.
The title caught my eye, there is more than a touch are artistry here Tailor Great presentational piece Love duncan x
Absolutely beautiful Tailor, I agree, well done. You are an artist, I truly mean that.---Melvina---
You have captured her perfectly - the gossamer lightness, the tinkle of her laughter and the inconstancy of her affections. Delicious, delicate, delightful. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxx
You docontinue to impress, my friend...Impeccable flux throughout this poetic gemstone.. You have a certain, tight, cripness to your verse, which i feel that i'd be able to identify as yours, without yiour name attached to the piece...Fine work Tailor '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
This really take one’s imagination for a ride. Your originality shows through in many ways. “occasionally, undoing An odd seam” “Her sparkling slippers Threw out beams” The ending is terrific: “Merged into stargold The color of shooting stars over prairie fire”