Thursday, July 3, 2008

High Waters' Tarn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The small lake seated at the top of the mountain,
what is there?

Few climb the steep slopes with hope, to drink the highest water,
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David Taylor
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Amber Lamb 14 July 2008

Lovely, captures the majestic beauty of a high mountain lake

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Gary Witt 03 July 2008

David: Extremely well-written. Sent me to the dictionary for 'tarn' (quite simply, a small mountain lake) . But the last line is really where the guts are, at least for me. There is a Source, and few climb to reach it. Nice picture, and an even better metaphor. Many thanks! -G

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Danny Reynolds 03 July 2008

Awesome David. Absolutely awesome.

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