Tuesday, June 12, 2007

High Tide Comments

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Somethings pulling at me
Like the moon and it's rotations
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JoAnn McGrath
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Theresa Moore 12 June 2007

a wonderful way to explain moods. I like the way your poem ends on an upbeat note.

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Marci Made 12 June 2007

How beautifully you have expressed the rise and fall of ones emotions to the tides. Great concept, your gray matter is doing beyond well.. Happy most especially to see you feeling better.....I presume that because you are awake before dawn here in the states...I am more happy that you are on a high right now...It sure beats the lows, that I for one can attest to. Too many of those............hugs, marci.

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David Taylor 12 June 2007

Nicely expressed the ocean has such emotions and such strength David

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Definitely Not Angie 12 June 2007

Emotions flowing and perhaps with the moon they're coming. going? As the sea below is stillness and all knowing.

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David Harris 12 June 2007

JoAnn, simplicity at its best with the message set in a silk wrapping. Beautiful and thanks for sharing it my special friend. David xxx

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Cirrus Spray 12 June 2007

You've created a really cool atmosphere in the poem! And I so agree with Andrew. Cheers, Archana

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 12 June 2007

There are Highs and lows in any life... JoAnn.. When your on a high you just have to take out the trusty old surf board and ride it for all its worth...10

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