High Summit Comments

Truly awe inspiring! I have come across a brilliant poet!

What a lovely poem. Very real and very beautiful.

Beautiful, great work smiles n hugs Rissa: -)

Very nice poem. You are obviesly a very talented writer! x

I, m glad this was recommended it's excellent! Love duncan X

Grand piece Kelly, absolutly outstanding

Kelly, grand work. Flows like a hymn. Anthemic even.

This piece sings like an angelic choir! Outstanding flow. Superb penning!

Kelly, Such a pleasure to read your work here. You have such a powerful voice. And this work, this poem is lovely and haunting. The things we see behind our eyes, beneath the clouds of yesterday. Sincerely, Carolynn

This is a beautiful song... wish someone writes the notes for this..... I just loved those lines.... Once you were the Tragic Poet, Plunged in depths of travesty, Plunged in sanguine dreams unspoken – Paved in stones of misery.

really really like well done!

There are a few sceptics who bang on their pulpits, of the death of the rhyme! They seem awfully quiet, at present! Loved it, Kelly. Danny

I like this poem a lot. So emotional and enjoyable to the end. I'll be reading more of yours :) KK

This is simply the best, Kelly. The gentle rhymes and sweet rhythms make a music of your images. The endeing is simply perfect. Raynette

Kelly, I loved the easy rhythm of this piece. It draws you in and makes you read on and on. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. David

good inner, end, and slant rhymes in this. graceful, pure poetry. its how contemporary rhyme should be done. -lp

I love the way you draw your reader in with the first lines. It sings indeed! And ends so triumphantly. This is wonderfully atmospheric and finely structured, taking the reader through the range of emotions. Grand piece. t x

remind me of a poem by oscar.