High Sierra Comments

when you finish the fat you could start on the mole i guess. bang! bang! what KIND of cigarette is that? :)

you can write a long story with a shortcut. It always your style, scotty dogg style! _Soul

I do like the way in which you cut the narrative into a set of staccato moments - like the feeling of complete and simultaneous incomplete phrase sets- you got my creative juices dripping on how to use this idea. Has haunts of Steinbeck but ultimately Mr Dogg it seeps into one.. Have been thinking about this mood since reading it a couple of days ago beginningn to realize its qualities simple but so so rich.