High School Slinger Comments

This is a great poem :)

Wonderful....very pleasing rhythm....great write..10+++++

Beautiful. I enjoyed reading your poem. You are lucky.

Very well expressed! Thanks! best regards, joan d.h.

Very good. Enjoyed learning a new word ' Slinger '

Thank you. I love 'Slinger', what a word, new to me! The poem is bursting at the seams, feels like its going to explode, but it holds.Great, thanks.

She's a Ballroom swinger Kareoke singer. She's the epitimy of all that I dread Her face a bit older, A heart getting colder How will you ever get fed? Now she's a real Hum-dinger A fiesty city minger There's one thing you'll have to accept On her roads to decieve She still spreads her disease Never leaving a heart unbled.................. Its really heart warming. Excellent juxtaposition. WELL DONE.

yeah I liked it.......10/10

I really like the way you put this together. It is easy to read and well it just takes all kinds to make the World go round.....very nice

Now.....surely you must know....the makings...of a good woman. The future is yours!

who is that girl, the highlight of your comment

wow this is a very strong poem great job

Over all i like it, it has lots of movement and a good flow.

Oh my goodness, Omar, she's quite a gal to be wary of! Really captures the imagination. Loved it! Best Wishes, Marilyn

forget subject matter and contents... all secondary...what primarily counts in a poem is the beauty and attraction of built up lines...wonderful poem presentation, Omar…a ten for you

Good poem well constructed gave you a ten the subject matter doesnn't do your talents justice Chris

Omar I believe this is a good poem however a bit cliche, but that doesnt matter for u were able to capture it in a way that people will relate or just like, as u've seen from ur other comments on this poem, so over all i like it jeff-

it is great poem but ur fingers r not the same.people differ.

Wow I really like this poem. I like the way it flows and your description pulls me in. Great write.

Well written and a good flow to it. She is a friend (only, thank heavens) and now lives in Teignmouth.