High Noon Comments

written with much effort and care. good. shan

She stepped backwards, inch by inch String by string, notes flew on wings Her silence held on a bite of lip And gone away in teary eyed pearls.some lovey and pure soul is sitting in pet'sprecious heartandi think some oneshould fill that place... well deserviing pat on her backfor splendidwork.. I wish i could be the man for it....hahahh lovely deserving 10

a fantastic allusion and flows well....beautiful poem.....10

This poem clearly shows progress and tighter control. I won't pretend to understand all the lines; a few sound awkward. Yet I'm glad to see that cliches are at a minimum this time. The poem flows more seamlessly and naturally than most of your others. Much better, Catrina.

Wow, what a beautiful creation, incredible work! 10 is the least for this kind of write.

catrina im sitting here in awe after reading expressive flowing thanks 10

10/10..............................!

Yummy this is wonderful, The poem consist of a perfect balance of Poetic words, a nice taste of normal words which not poetic readers can enjoy and an encellent flow to keep the readers lock in... Well excuted...Good Job C.T.Heart... Voted 10/10/10

another play of fire, fresh from the oven, nice piece as always

ma'am, you always amaze me! very remarkable and fantastic!