Tuesday, May 2, 2006

High Expectations Comments

Rating: 4.3

Consume me, and end this pain
Remember none of life’s strain
Cover my skin with numbness
Depression will succumb to us
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Anushka Kumari 20 August 2022

Please

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Anushka Kumari 20 August 2022

Please explain the meaning of this poem

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Catlin Crawford 17 July 2006

'Time is our debt, which no one can steal.' Wonderful Job... simply grand.

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***** ********* 12 July 2006

Beautifully asked for release Jack, you have a wonderful poetic style, Tai

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Sydney Daniels 07 May 2006

Careful, Jack, your gift is showing. Peeking out of the darkness. Great job!

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Patricia Gale 04 May 2006

Absolutly fabulous lines: Consume me, and end this pain Remember none of life’s strain Cover my skin with numbness Well done! Patriica Gale

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Anushka Kumari 20 August 2022

Ma'm could you please explain the underlined meaning of this poem

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