Tuesday, April 17, 2018

High Am I On Life Comments

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Falling are the raindrops.
Many appear to stop atop evergreen trees.
Sitting to sparkle with an effervesence.
Bubbling warm hearts envisioning ideals.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2018

Birds dance and chirp in freedom. Raindrops appear to stop atop evergreen trees. A nice imagery is drawn in this poem. This is brilliantly penned...10

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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