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favorite lines: Lonely I am no one can see no one knows Even i won't give a clue In silence i cry..i moan I fake a smile laugh alone. i'll bet your English is better now! but i get the picture. yes, the Blues. i like the rhymes well enough. i have other comments below from..............well, it was just last year! i only glanced at them. i'm glad you took one typo/spelling suggestion. in case i did not mention it before today: in Poet's Notes.....i suggest ...is more bitter to swallow..... bri :)

Speaking loud in a quite night..............quiet? not quite! In silent i cry..i moan I fake a smile laugh alone...............i like these lines, but i think silence, not silent. even putting on a fake smile may help you feel better. try it while you are alone. eating pizza at the same time might help! wish i could be there to share the pizza! ! oh, i see a previous comment from good OLD me, below! bri ;)

i would say that wounded/hurt pride is a sense/feeling that oneself is not as worthy in some way(s) as was once thought by himself/herself. perhaps a person e.g. you felt that she/he was in a good relationship, such as a marriage, but the other person breaks off the relationship and blames you, saying e.g. you were not doing a good job as my partner. a wounded heart might also follow the above scenario if the person whose pride was damaged also felt a real loss had occurred, i.e, really missed his/her partner and wished for a reconciliation or 'return to better days' and the relationship. ============================= Lonely I am no one can see no one knows Even i won't give a clue In silent i cry..i moan I fake a smile laugh alone................sounds like a very sad situation! reaching out to others, and talking things over with someone 'comfortable' to speak to, and finding something else to fill the loneliness should help. i find that a new wife helps. ice cream is good. with cake is even better! bri :)

Good poem. Remember that one is never really alone sor there is one who sees all and cares. Read mine - If There Be No God - Adeline

Head bowed but never yield Bamboos bend in strong wind but remain on field Rain-storm covered clouds Mountain & hills remain proud.. pride is it a virtue or a burden of the self? big question. humility is the opposite and it is a great virtue. thank you for your insightful poem. tony

Lonely i am! But, there is hope ahead. Thanks for sharing.

all what a woman goes through Head bowed but never yield Bamboos bend in strong wind but remain on field Rain-storm covered clouds Mountain & hills remain proud.. love the comparison. nicely put. Agree she is totally strong.

Head bowed- but never yield Bamboos bend in strong wind but remain on field Rain-storm- covered clouds Mountain & hills -remain proud.. a celebration of self and pride.... very nice meaningful lines, a message for those trudging the littered milky way.... nice liked

Another well written piece. Lonely-alone No one see, no one know Even i won't give a clue In silent i cry..i moan I fake a smile-laugh - in awhile I've got pride! I have pride! I like the above stanza. But please, hide no more! well done!

Done......... .thanks

Thanks Sir John! ..may I know those few corrections please?

Thanks Sir Herbert Guitang for the rated 10.... Thanks you notice my poem Hiding Inside I'm so happy! ! ! :) Thanks a lot....

I rated this poem 10 Nice and wonderful poem

Thanks Sir Chinedu Dike for taking time to read..

A good title. My favourite line is Bamboos bend in strong wind - remain on field. Lovely.

Thanks Sir Pranab for the comments...very enlightening! Have short one also But with this poem of mine so many words came to my mind. My fingers will get angry if I don't write it all..LOL Thanks again

Head bow- but never yield..... nice write with so many words tried you to bind with hyphen. Well.