Hiding. Comments

I hide my tears with smiles. I hide my pain through laughs I hide behind a wall too afraid to let it down. If people see the real me, they might not like it. I cover myself with lip gloss and nice clothes, wonderful poem..really liked it as its based on reality and you expressed your innerslf and your pain and feelings very well in this poem..the verses are sweetly done and the idea in thoughtful eniugh..your covering with your lips gross and to wear nice clothes.. these are all lovely lines and meaningful enogh..10/10

Wow, it's amazing how truthful this piece actually is. You'd be surprised with the amont of girls that hide themselves this way; because they're afraid of what other people will think of them. Good write. H&K's - jessica ♥