Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Hideaway Haven. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Skirted by billowing green
A cottage stands anciently tall, within
Wall after wall of neat chequered field.
Dwarfed by the presence of lush lovely land.
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Blackwell 27 September 2008

Fay, I remember cottages like this from my early childhood, roof gone, walls still proud and whole. One I recall had a greengage tree growing in the kitchen which was full of ripening fruit. A memorable write. Bob

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Vincent James Turner 25 September 2008

you have capture the essensce of good old England her with great aplomp, your poetry at times appears timeless, you have a great way of opening your poems, they absorb the reader straight away, 'Skirted by billowing green A cottage stands anciently tall' just wonderful regards Vincent

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Bob Gibson 22 September 2008

Fay Fay! you have taken me to your England, a forest of bluebells in the spring, the greenest of grass, the permanence of stone, the beauty of the true English countryside, timeless! my dear!

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Kathleen West 16 September 2008

Beautiful poem. Thanks for taking us there.

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Tom Balch 16 September 2008

How lovely, , a really nice piece, I can see it now .10 from Tom

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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