Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Hide Your Benevolence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Show your face not, to the one you helped, never
Also blind be you of the face of the one you helped, ever
Vanish from your thoughts help rendered, thus sever
But see and never forget the face of one who helped you
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Narayanan Ramakrishnan
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Very useful advice indeed. Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its simple style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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