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South African farmers mowed down like hay
The hyenas now cart their belongings away
Lives stolen under the banner of equality
Justice served at the edge of the machete
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Edmund Strolis
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Pamela Sinicrope 31 January 2016

This is well done Edmund. I love the title. Very thought provoking write. Will this be your submission if you choose to participate? Inequality is such a complex issue with so many nuances and inconsistencies. You point some of this out well in your tight verse.

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Sarah Persson 30 January 2016

This is one subject not shown in the press. So many South African farmers being killed. Little do these killers know about how this is so detrimental to their own welfare. Nice write Edmund

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