My friend,
Let me hide behind a smile,
Even if you know the truth.
Yes,
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Excellent title. I wouldn't change a word.Ivy. Simplicity is definately what you have going for you here.When your readers applaud, you know the poem has connected. Warm regards, Sandra
I really love this, it's so honest and who amongst us has not felt this way.A great write.Love Duncan
Yes, all of your 3 examples of people from whom you'd hide ring true. I've hidden, the 1st example you cite is the one I remember most. As Thomas comments below, I think most of us can relate to this poem.
This is something which I feel most of the time.But I could not put it in writing like you clearly taking a pic of my mind. Really great Ivy regards
we all hide there sometime, you are a fantastic poet, I don't say that often but you really are.
And there are those who expect to see a smile for better reasons. Nice and sensitive write.