Hide And Seek Comments
In our childhood days, remember, we used
To play Hide And Seek? You hid yourself
Behind a bush, or in a ditch or on the branch
Of a tree, but I could always find you out.
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I really liked your poem, its very deep and it speaks about human nature very well
Thank you @Meda Meda, for your appreciative and inspiring comment. I've just read your excellent poem 'Departure' and was saddened by the expression of abandonment and emptiness.
that is the beauty of hide and seek- -always seeking. she got you huh (smiles) and she is elusive- -very near yet so far enjoyed much, (this is the first poem i have read now that I am back to poemhunter)
Thanks for your comment, Naida. It seems you've been playing hide and seek with poemhunter- disappeared again?
Khairul thanks for your comments on my poem. I enjoy your poem 'Hide and Seek' very much; it's lovely and really moved me.
Thanks for appreciating my poem. I've read and commented on another of your poems- 'Recital'.
I remember well the hide and seek, in my time there was no other toy for me, that is why today everything is a toy, whatever comes to me. All the hobbies, all the volunteer work, all that computer findings, all are toys. Then I see you feel not right not to see clearly. I say, when we meet someone we have to learn from each other. When one or both do not learn anymore, that is the time to separate. This is life. Always a new and a new lesson comes to us, and we live until we can go forward and learn. Wishing you a long and healthy life.
Thank you, dear poetess Lasoaphia Wuxazs, for being so kind in your comment. I am much inspired by your illuminating thoughts that you've left here after reading my poem.
@Valsa George Thanks for your comments on my poem. Appreciate!
@Aftab Alam Khursheed Thanks for appreciating my poem and generously rating it 10/10. Much obliged!
Hide and seek starts from childhood. Fond memories are hidden in the heart for a life time. Beautiful poem.
Thanks @Tirupathi Chandrupatla, for reading my poem and sharing your kind thoughts.
Thanks for reading this poem and appreciating it, Mallika Achuthan Menon.
Having someone in your heart is always nice, but if that is the only place you see them now, it is sad, it sounds like you've lost a very dear friend
'but if that is the only place you see them now, it is sad' - thanks for your understanding. Much obliged by your reading the poem and leaving a comment here, @Darlene Walsh.
A poem carrying the pristine beauty of innocent childhood enjoyments! Playing Hide and Seek was so exciting... Thank you for heralding the memories of those days of bliss!
Well composed love poem and reference of innocence (Childhood) to adolescence lovely thanks bhai 10 ASARWB.
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7/29/2025 11:29:40 PM # 1.0.0
Bursting with beauty and impregnated with innocence. Well done my friend!
Thanks for your wonderful, alliterative, poetic comment, my dear friend Howard! Much obliged.