Thursday, July 20, 2006
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They were playing shopkeeper's game in my parking lot,
Decorated a little corner with little dolls, little kites, little toys,
And every little thing they got,
Making innocent moves, in a round circle they sat,
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Ashish Ram
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Preeti - is here!
24 July 2006
...gosh..the message creeps in beautifully out of the poem! Preets
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7/18/2025 10:53:11 PM # 1.0.0
Great message Ashish! Yes, there is so much more value in Love and the innocent sweet things of life... You captured a feeling in this poem and offered a great theme for the reader to hang on too.((Thank you)) Take care of U Shelley