Friday, December 12, 2008

Hide And Seek Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why playing the game of hide n seeks?
Come, come, come,
Come and talk to me directly.
What do you want?
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Mahfooz Ali
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 October 2010

Bully [as adjective] is occult Love …hide and seek [noetic] ripens love Fiancée is not bullying but using bully hide and seek Very good emotion…enjoyed… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Mahfooz Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Kavya Manjusha 14 August 2009

Very nice, Emotion is clear, simple, direct and pure.... I liked it... keep up the good work.. 'ada'

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Carmen Johnson 01 April 2009

I like it. Often in the game of love, it is nothing but at game of hide and seek. But often those we seek, are hiding from us. Or we are hiding from those that seek us. Each too afraid to be visible in the open, for fear of being hurt. I really liked the meaning in the words you wrote. The feeling. Good write.

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Lovleen Walia 14 December 2008

really a gud job sir....keep it up...

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