Monday, February 2, 2009

- Hide And Seek - Comments

Rating: 2.9

My father gets the wooden stick
he counts from five
i run and hide...
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Connie Yost 13 May 2013

I love this! It makes the sun shine! Thank you for nice comment.

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Hassan Hegazy 16 June 2010

good poem reminds me of gregy orr's poem for his daughter and my poem when Yomna laughs hassan

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Seema Chowdhury 05 February 2009

wow such a lovley poem. it shows your true and pure feelings of love for your father. a special bond that father and son shares. thanks for sharing this lovely piece.

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