Monday, October 30, 2006

Hide And Seek Comments

Rating: 5.0

hide and seek of pain and pleasure
spinning us in whirlpool beyond measure
when and where, in life, we be in leisure
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prasanna kumari
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Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2008

a nice three liner here, telling a multiliner message... good poetic thinking, prasanna...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 April 2008

hey prasanna........nice write though.......

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Kimberly Lovesyou 25 June 2007

I like this one alot it explains alot in just a few words......

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Roger Bowman 02 December 2006

I love this one its so straight to the point. Roger

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