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Superb! Pragmatic observation.... tersely expressed.... Appreciated.

Great poem and message nice to recite as well as read I the confines of the mind kb

This is so true for this age when vocal communication is so prized. So beautifully expressed.

Deep and profound, and a pleasure to read

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insight poem written with conviction.

If you tuck the name of a loved one under your tongue too long without speaking it it becomes blood sigh............/// great write; superb expression

Nice poem. Whatever we hide may become a part of thought. Thank you

No one sees the fuel that feeds you.so true... thank u. tony

A cute beautiful poem. Body and soul are entwined by language. A miracle is found. Amazing.

A beautiful poem. I liked it.

Of a loved one! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beautifully done. It is very hard to hide love. It comes its own at the right moment. Expressed with clever wordplay this is a nice poem.10+++

Intriguing poem, so are many sweet things encountered in life.

If you tuck the name of a loved one under your tongue too long without speaking it it becomes blood sigh the little sucked-in breath of air hiding everywhere beneath your words.- - - -Love is such a powerful emotion that one can not keep it secret for too long.If it is suppressed, it consumes you more.An amazing poem ! !

Such an interesting poem.... thanks for posting....

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I am speechless!

it is a very true poem. 'Let the world know what you stand for, what you love, ' as I always say