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well done sir This poem is distinguished in several ways, including: rare subject, strong and new poetic images, use of the artistic writing style, deep and significance content, etc.... and all of these can only be done by someone with good experience writing good poetry. Congratulations 10/10

the float of tingling like bees buzzing blurred wings on lips

the float of tingling like bees buzzing blurred wings on lips ……………… This poem is distinguished in several ways, including: rare subject, strong and new poetic images, use of the artistic writing style, deep and significance content, etc.... and all of these can only be done by someone with good experience writing good poetry. Congratulations 10/10

Sustains the hint of mystery in a succinct cloud of few words.