Sunday, July 30, 2017

Hidden Wonders Comments

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A spiral veiled by Milky Way
has been brought to light of day
in the image Hubble revealed
of a galaxy concealed.
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Harley White
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2017

Wonderment of universe has been well captured. Juxtaposed of poet's note helps to know more. I love the lines most are... above us beings here on earth witnesses the death and birth of fleeting mortal lives that pass neath the heavens' looking glass in dream of floating bubble world while by time's illusion hurled with stellar pace through outer space wearing ever-changing face. Marvelous poem, stunning expression. Thanks for sharing....10

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Harley White 31 July 2017

I genuinely appreciate your careful reading and encouraging comment! Thank you!

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Qiniso Mogale 30 July 2017

Brilliant! Poetry in motion. Well penned

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Harley White 31 July 2017

Thank you so much for your kind words!

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 July 2017

This is beautiful poetry. Being a lover of anything related to universe and its wonders I like this poem very much. Thanks for posting. Enjoyed.10+++

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Harley White 30 July 2017

Thank you very much for your marvelous words! I share in your wonderment of the universe and am most encouraged by your reaction to my poem!

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