Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Hidden Want Comments

Rating: 4.7

Yamin, Yamin!
Where may I find you?
When can I hold you
for a moment or more?
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Melissa Hurst
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 August 2008

I recommend this one as well. It also has the clarity that a reader requires. The desire and the hidden want are hidden no more after this is read. This kind of expression does not often appear in writing, but it should more often. Truth between people is a good thing. Truth has a way of destroying lies. GW62

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 August 2008

it's so beauuuuuuuuutiful melissa. romancing the gem of your heart. highly seducive.

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Blue Eyes 10 July 2008

i love the way u talk about your desires freely

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Marvin Brato 01 July 2008

A lustful desire hidden in the heart can be the most blissfully savored ecstasy one can possess in the hands of a true lover! A 10.

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