Friday, February 13, 2009

*hidden Sighs Comments

Rating: 2.9

The gentle breeze as messenger
whispered the words on thy beloved's ears
And make that soulful dream, not fancy
Into the heart of reality..............
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Reshma Ramesh 13 February 2009

beautiful write.............well penned

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Catrina Heart 13 February 2009

A romantic composition written so heartfelt though there's a touch of sadness at the last verses...Cute gentle breeze giggles, excited to the story of love...however the protagonist is anxious about his demise for no one can claimed the shyly future of thy love...10++++++

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