Hidden Shores! Comments

Is there any storms which can wash away these thoughts forever? ? ? ? What great words. Again your heart writes. I thank You Geetha

The poet asking many retrospective or rhetorical questions is the beauty of this write. I was wondering whether hidden shores could be a solace later when the hidden waves may suddenly surge forward to outrage the scared lands off the seas.. Hidden shores will do the needful, believe it Geetha.

Hidden shores, great title and great write, when memories are too painful, we wish the tide would wash them away, but living is about learning to survive through the hardships!

washing away is the right metaphor Geetha...your rhetorical questions are tactfully managed! Many thanks for your kind words, they mean a lot to me!

The waves that lash the shore Taketh and also bringeth back Altering shapes and egos And always exuding new hope........... Very good write

Our mind is a perennial source of hidden thoughts, which may be assimilated whenever needed...and which can refresh ourselves whenever we are in distress...nicely written poem...

After the storms washes away the shore Does the shores remain the same? madam fantastic lines.time never wash away everything.i like it

Time and tide will wash away everything one day though it's a matter of time when..? ......Geetha.........memories are very strange things.......they thrill and grill...........and time spares none and at length them kill.....very good write.............

A heartfelt and thought-provoking write Geetha, there is a final storm waiting for us all which will wash everything away one day.

Time heals, but the scar remains... We have to live with painful memories too! It is so with everyone...! Success lies in braving the adversities and looking into life with fresh hope! The tinge of melacholy in the poem makes it more emotive! !

Is there any storms which can wash away these thoughts foreve... nice nice...10 not storms but relation warm that can tie you with love is all about.....

Dear Geetha this is a very beautiful poem time washes away one's life how very true A definite ten

Powerful memories are like pillars on which even our present are built. There is no way we can erase old memories as yet though some research is going on in this direction. A wonderful write and a food for thought.

thoughts hidden in shores of the mind Get washed away. The shore is no more the same. Nice poem.

Thank you Lyn for the Heartfelt comment.

Dear Geetha. I could read these beautiful words over and over again. What a title. Thank you for this powerful write