Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Hidden Semantics Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hidden semantics of deep desires
flow through the bodies silent.
Words beyond words float
to and fro between us.
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Neera Lollbeeharry
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Chinedu Dike 31 October 2017

Deep emotions expressed with wonderful command of the language. Good work, very realistic description. Thanks for sharing Neera.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2014

This is a great piece of poem, as also a great piece of art. The lay out of the lines is extra ordinary, drawing a hidden picture that captures the eye at the word 'liquid', coincidentally meaningful!

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Neera Lollbeeharry 12 December 2015

Thank you for your appreciation. Sometimes inspiration makes you do wonders.

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