Hidden Meaning Of My Poem Hum Kachi Umr Men Pakne Lage. Comments

The poem is meaningful.

hum doraahtey hain beeta hua zamana jub hum pyare se mard thei aour woh zanana beet gayy musphiron woh zamana abh aour kya likhein humm apkay liye yahan aphsana ek din toe hum koe bhee hai zanna phir zubh humain padogay kehna yeh poet toe thaaa zanna pehchannna khuda haifz keh doe aaj toe 2017 koe toe hai padd rahha zanna

Thank you for translating this beautiful and interesting into English. My seven tunes! Thanks for modifying it in a rainbow! Well, now you can see me in the fields as crops for all humans, animals, insects, and the birds. Instead of loving you I now love life. Wonderful philosophy! Loved it.

Thoughts are the same old Sufi thoughts but Akhtar Jawad has presented it in a new style. A great poem is it.

Thanks for the English translation, beautiful lines