Sunday, July 9, 2006

Hidden Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes are the clear windows to my soul,

I close them like curtains to hide, conceal,
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Katie Berry
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purple moon 22 June 2007

this is a poignant poem, i have a poem about a secret love, inspired by two people that i once worked with and a coversation that i held with one of them, it's called 'SECRET OF THE HEART'. you are correct, the eyes cannot hide true feelings, it's that stolen glance that gives it away to others, and it's so painful when two peole connect and the time and place just don't allow anything to come of it. well done. true and powerful feeling here. x

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Kelsi McvVigh 11 August 2006

Love it. It came from the heart...don't let it eat it's way out

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Sydne Morris 09 July 2006

Nice Katie great rhyming Sydne P.S read my new poem I have faced and see if ya like it!

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