Sunday, November 18, 2007

Hidden Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A gentle embrace,
Such beauty in your face.
A smile,
That makes me able to travel for miles.
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jordan erickson
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Saane Pahulu 21 October 2009

wow this poem is intimately beautiful. i love the perspective of the guys love for his girl and that one kiss can make him beg for more, thats the exciting part when you know that someone wants more of you. great imagery that starts off innoccently then gets deeper into the poem.10+++

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Always About love 21 May 2008

you must really care about that girl. shes lucky.

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