Monday, August 19, 2013

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Rating: 5.0

Excuses made; anew
Every morning
Showcasing novel reason
To escape the school hours
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Queeny Gona
Dad
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Bharati Nayak 01 October 2016

Loved this poem, dear Qeeny Gona.Like many school kids who don't want to go to school you too pretended sickness to get permission from father to stay home.Your father knew it but still gave permission.Very nicely presented the psychology of a child.Thanks for sharing.The poem reminds me of my school days.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2016

Smile flows out of my eyes! ! Nice work.

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Ken E Hall 29 July 2015

You and a million schoolies have done the same and parents know the game like the poem says dads bliss...a slice of life's reality shown here...good...regards

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