James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, May 22, 2014

Hidden In The Wings Of Soft Cotton Comments

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Soften their hearts and minds be still O' my tongue.
Intelligence is the tool Kings learn some are born with.
Forgiveness will be the cool spring that you drink from.
From the four corners of the Earth pours forth great restraint.
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Kevin Patrick 07 June 2014

Absolutely gorgeous with your words and your depictions I had to read it several times to get through the message, and it always seemed to change, their something wonderfully cyclical in nature you begin with soften their hearts and minds and then your closing has into the wings of soft white cotton making it feel as if its a never ending patter. A wonderful read

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Colleen Courtney 24 May 2014

Such a beautifully written poem! Poetry at it's finest!

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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