Thursday, February 16, 2012

Hidden In The Shadows Comments

Rating: 3.5

Seeing you kiss a girl while I walked pasted, your lips touching hers when you knew I was the girl who cared the most about you.
Telling me I'm crazy and dumb I just try to move on from you; the feeling of sadness travels over me
Quietly I cry with the tears drifting across my face while people cheer you on when you kissed that chick.
I was the one who care a lot when nobody else would date you
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J.b. Lebuert 17 February 2012

Don't wait too long darlin' - get on with your life and keep writing - I do see talent there - get out of the shadows and under the sun and let the Lord guide your path to joy and fun. Only you can complete yourself - nobody else can. Write On!

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Noelle Mott

Noelle Mott

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