Hidden In My Poetry?
Are my thoughts revealed?
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Oooooh I really love the 'rice paper' imagery. I am a little jealous that I didn't think of it first though. Really fine poem JoJo thanks.
I agree with David below.... Poetry gives glimpses of your soul.... Words slipping from your subconcience onto a warm page.... Rx
Loved this, JoJo. Tis so true that even when we try to hide, our real thoughts too often creep into our writings. I often try to be vague, but am usually unsuccessful. This is a fine poem, I enjoyed it very much. Regards, Leria
Lil sis, As Mark said, your writing reveals, not hides. We all do it, it helps us face ourselves and share who we are. Great poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it. Big Bruv
Great read JoAnn! This is the place to share hidden thoughts! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad
This is a really good poem i like this because its different your talking about your poem
A poet's life is an open book! Thanks for sharing this gem.