Sunday, August 5, 2018

Hidden In Me (A Comment On Butterfly - Poem By Yoonoos Peerbocus) Comments

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Clouds that steal colors of love from the seas,
Lightning, thundering; aggressive and passionate,
Lose all they have in ecstasy of love,
Who writes such a romantic fate?
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Geetha Jayakumar 08 August 2018

Beautiful poem on nature. All that is hidden in me is hidden in nature too. Very Well said....All are outputs of you in love and a lovely blast! Loved the theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 August 2018

lovely stanza- When the rainbows disappear you turn your eyes When the clouds are gone you spring as flowers O you the ancient sweetheart! You become butterflies Colors kiss the colors in aromatic showers. // vote//10++++++++++++++++

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Red Soul 06 August 2018

A very interesting and beautiful poem Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalid Saifullah 06 August 2018

The selfie is beautiful and wonderful.

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