Monday, September 1, 2014

Hidden In Ashes Comments

Rating: 5.0

You ignored me many times,
As if,
I am a stranger to you,
When you look at me,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 21 October 2017

Buried alive in ashes, Still hot with passion, Beautiful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2014

Fantastic poem. True friendship will never get broken forever. It will remain alive in heart. Sometimes misunderstandings can happen but this a phase of life. Inner conscience will never allow, to let go off the friendship. I loved reading each lines.

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Valsa George 02 September 2014

So the grey clouds have drifted away and the sky is once more cerulean blue! The smouldering fire of friendship has strengthened into bright flames! Great write!

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Tadasha Tripathy 01 September 2014

A day will come, When my conscience will send, A message to me, Being aware of my guilt, Good experience sir. I liked it much.

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Salini Nair 01 September 2014

sir a wide aspect that i couldn't explore..............but nice to read

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 September 2014

The apparent meaning of this poem is activation of a dormant friendship, but it seems to me the real meaning of this poem is too far beyond the frontiers of imagination.

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Sd Tiwari 01 September 2014

A great philosophical poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 September 2014

Topics itself is so nice lovely

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