Hidden In A Smile The You The Why.. Comments

It is warmth in of face...It is the shining mask of grace. works tick tock tick beautiful content flow and ambience...great in your own tradition really liked it..: -) cheers

w-o-w....that was very deep......i'd say this is one of your best poems......very powerful...actually made me smile.....nice :) ...very nice :)

wowwwww im tickled Tamara is happy good write

this my friend... is the kind person.. deep.... real deep.. in you.. this is awesome.

Sweet...kind...gentle...always :)

a poem with beauty and gentleness 10

Wonderful piece IIP...full of honesty...Fi 10++++: 0)

Well you haven't hidden your feeling here my friend...brilliant show of your talent...keep up the great work...poet

beautiful poem...keep up the good work! very soulful! a round of applause for you! ! !

this is a wonderful mtrully touching poem poetry, , thank you friend..loved it..10++++++++++ It flees from the pain inside the you it's mind the pain it's caused by some the other not of you. It is beyond the stiffest lip of peace one finds, one tear it's graced none like no other kind. It is warmth of face.It is the shining mask of grace. It is not shame some other thinks who has no smile to see her through, like you. It is the running rivers mighty shore, from which the ocean drinks in life to grow.