Hidden Gold Comments

Love motivates life and pleases moment of dignity of light. To lighten your secret load, taste of freedom of love is the power. Life needs love and carries love. Nicely penned brilliant poem is shared here.10

Peach, each! Teach; to reach out to the world. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Lovely poem from a natural poet.

A beautiful poem, well constructed. I see here a woman, sorrowfully, witnessing the love of her life quietly slipping away. Wonderfully expressed with well chosen words.

A loaded lullaby of life that is sails the sea of sadness in search of hidden treasure. Well done my friend!

Beautiful poem with indepth meaning. The soft lullaby voice was never heard in the loud practical song. The soft and luscious of ripened peach was dripping down, it would have just left to ground, Before that compromise was done and at the right time, and that tasted its freedom.... I can visualize each lines, yes, it was not just a gold but a heart of gold that knows to forgive too. I loved it Hazel.

A lot of men are difficult to live with I guess, but. Oat do, have some hidden gold as recompense. Interesting write.

A Very nice poem Hazel... I could feel what the character in the poem feels.. And that's the beauty... About one thing i am pretty sure.. The one for whom this poem has been written would be least interested in it... Beacuse unfortunately this is the way... Nice work! !

Now when I reread it with the help of your notes, it is all clear and I must say it is a deep write and I get the picture of a woman who got strangled in the rigid mould, her man set fo her! Thanks!

A highly charged poem of love and sensitivity.I like the style of the narrative.It has a natural flow. The title adds a touch of mystery and depth to the story of the poem.10.

a good read about hidden gold well written

I am lost in this seascape, i think it needs the poet's notes to understand this poem Hazel!

The Hidden Gold sometimes holds heartache and pain. I can feel your heart in these words, just like all of your wonderful words.