Wednesday, April 25, 2018

Hidden Breasts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do you fight for the resources?
Though I am old and weak still I can feed
My children black, yellow, brown or white
Explore a hidden breast, that's all you need.
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2018

It is a brilliant poem on earth and earth day having stunning expression and nice collocation. The title of the poem is justified to its contents. Thank u dear Akhtar ji for your wise presentation.10

0 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 April 2018

A brilliant thought provoking write. Yes, Mother Earth has abundant resources for all. Beautifully crafted write...10

0 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 25 April 2018

Seek and ye shall find. (There is an upper limit.) With or without me, the Earth will pro-exist in some other consciousness. When low seems irrecoverable, I'm glad to experience hidden.

0 0 Reply
Khalid Saifullah 25 April 2018

A great short poem, a lovely message for the whole world.

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

Gorakhpur
Close
Error Success