Monday, July 6, 2009

Hidden Behind A Mask Comments

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No emotions behind these eyes
caged thoughts and feeings hidden within
signs of laughter erased from these lips
standing hard with a smirk to cover the traces of happiness.
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Saane Pahulu
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Eyan Desir 15 September 2009

Good write that calls for a 10

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Enya Wynants 03 August 2009

Wow, that's really a beautiful poem! It's so sad...but very nice! ^^

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Saane Pahulu

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