Hidden Beauty Comments

Agree with Gan, not all snakes are poisonous but those that aren't are constrictors who will squeeze the life out of their prey. A colourful insightful journey through the world of words Vijay. Beware the crouching tiger hidden dragon.

It's a beautiful poem liked the last line a lot

I like this poem, but do not agree with the conclusion that a human can be more beautiful than nature. I do agree about an unveiled danger though. Write on!

very beautiful and true.

Now you've got to go looking for examples of danger and work out if woman is most dangerous as well as most beautiful

very powerful last line. Like the alliteration too!

Remember, not all snakes are poisonous. Only a few.

true the most beautiful and most delicate of them all a true woman

I agree and the whole way through I was thinking, 'woman art beauty'.

hmmm... interesting.... quite good n quite captivating

very captivating peice your use of wordds are powerful and beautiful I loved it _Yuki 10++

Is an interesting catch line enough? I would prefer perhaps some more sustained substance for your references seem to have been somewhat said already, moon and June springs to mind. Thought Provoking non the less. Check my words, for t'would be much appreciated. Jackson

Very good thought line.. elegantly expressed! ! 10 ++..keep penning down your beautiful thoughts...

Nice poem. Well penned Thanks for sharing with me

great imagery and work 10+ kept it up

you put me in the Atlas mountain! ! ! it s cold in full summertime! ! ! that s the beauty! ! !

You have taken us on a beauty trip round the world and at the end realised the inevitable. You said it all my friend, you talked about the danger but didn't sense it. Was a lovely trip around the word in a minute for free for that you get.....10+++